by nikki Oct 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Why? Why did u do it? |
by amber
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Very good i am sorry its true |
by Britney
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Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. And im sorry that something that bad happend to you I also have a poem about my rape called "the first" great job though 5/5. xox |
by x Saiya
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Wow.. |
by HansRik
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This poem is very heartfelt, and emotive. It is excellently written, and the diction used is consistently efficient. I liked the structure and the imagery used. But I am sorry that you feel this way. Good luck, and well done! |
by Jason Meres
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A powerful piece indeed, contentually sound and well spoken. |