One more Thing

by Dark Savior   Oct 9, 2005


I wish i could say that i had one more thing
Something that wasn't wrong, or did belong

I sit along as i watch the sky
praying to god, hoping i die.

Wishing that i could find the one
you can't it's god's way to make fun

i wish i could truly know how to love
it's gone from me just because

Too many have broken and shattered my heart
Each trying to put it back together to rip it apart.

One after one, each woman i have known
has made me feel worst and left me alone

i pray each day that god would kill me
because no one knows what it's like to be me.
But everyone knows what it is like to leave me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Nice job. much propz and keep yo head up, babe.

    Laterz,
    Your Boricua {bx girl}

  • 18 years ago

    by raquel

    This is so real... i relate so much to this... just never put it into words as u have... nice...

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Hey Shaun =)...this is a good poem, and i can relate....except, it's guys that break my heart =P...love is such a boger sometimes lol....just hang in there, you can talk to me or PM me anytime you need/want to....keep up the awesome work *GIANT bear hug*

    -brittnay-

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Err. it's i love you.*

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Hey sweety. i've totally left the site. something made me c'mon here today...and i read your poems only... i wish you would talk to me. I know I don't have all the answers, but I have the passion to love & help you.... but you push away all those chances...

    *sighs*

    i ♥ you.

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