HE DIED FOR A DARE!

by Leanne   Oct 28, 2005


They played in the abandoned house
trespassing that was they
the boards all broken down
they acted like a stupid clown.

They had a little dare
the girls all shouted yer
he got to the rusty old beam way up high
and that was when he said good- bye.

He was pretending to be superman
but soon turned into dead man
as he lay there blood coming out his nose
and his eyes started to close.

The ambulance got there
but not quite in time
as they game they had played
played there whole lives.

If he hadn't made the dare
and they girls didn't shout yer
maybe he'd still be here
and not done that deadly dare.

I read this story in a magazine about a silly dare the kids found an abandoned house and all hung out there. the eldest boy made the dare and when everyone said no he was making chicken noises in there face. One of the girls was his girlfriend
She still blames her self.
Even if some one is daring you and calling you a wimp don't give in if you know its not safe JUST WALK AWAY and be strong or this is how you may end up.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Well done great poem. you have some spelling mistakes, but i don't think they matter i could understand it fine keep it up. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    Oh the peer pressure.
    i love what the poem is about.
    gd job x rob

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Thats a great poem and has such an important message behind it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ANNA

    People don't think about might happen if u don't know when to say no

  • 18 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    Kool poem hunni!
    *5/5*
    luv ya loadz
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

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