Razor Blade

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Oct 5, 2005


Sitting alone with my razor blade
its covered in a pretty red shade

it gently wraps around my wrist
its charm is too hard to resist

I watch the blood drip
slowly as my skin rips

as I watch it flow down
it seeps onto the ground
wishing in my blood I could drown

my razor always crys with me
its tears are just red
its helpful, you have to agree

it comforts me when
I only wish to be dead
pours out the pain I feel within

only for the night
it will be my releif
even if its wrong or right

what it represents
a constant reminder
of hurtful events

just let me forget
for just a little while
maybe allow me to even smile

its just a small fix
to be able to handle lifes kicks

my razor blade is my best friend
it makes me forget
long enough for my heart to mend

No one has to know
It my little secret
No one has to see the blood flow.

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[Author's Note]

*still under construction*

This doesn't mean I cut, Or I Don't,
I understand why people do it,
I know several people that do it...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    This is a great poem love your style of work
    Leona

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is interesting, I like your choice of words, like 'rip' it really makes the poem more effective and realistic.

  • 18 years ago

    by David McIntosh

    Did that really happen? Very real picture in my minds eye when I read that one

  • 18 years ago

    by Dave

    Really powerfull poem ya have done here i rweally enjoyed you playing with words my only semi-negitive thing i would have to say is that i have read thru it a few times now and it sort of has a problem with the flow mid way thru still great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Well i loved it...honest...this was great this is one cutting poem ill remember

    its just a small fix
    to be able to handle lifes kicks

    best part

    really nice job it flowed well...rhymes were all good...i think it may have been shaky in a few areas but i think only once or twice...i enjoyed reading this great job

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