Why Don't You Care?

by Torn   Nov 3, 2005


She needs serious help,
Is what the doctor said.
But you keep on ignoring,
Saying it's my fault instead.

This has been going on too long,
For it to be seeking attention.
This is me dying everyday,
Or did i forget to mention?

Can't you see all the signs,
I'm broken and bleeding too.
I can't live like this,
With the things you make me do.

What has to be wrong with me,
For you to see I'm not OK.
All i need is your support,
Why do you push me away.

I'm broken hearted,
With the words you speak.
The lack of love and care,
Are chasing me to defeat.

I want to end this pain,
Don't you see I'm nearly dead.
Everyday i die a little,
And then i lie to this head.

I can't do this anymore,
Now everything is a fake.
Not only my smile or laugh,
But my whole life...i hate.

*just venting, yet again...
To my parents i suppose, it's more complicated than a poem but i need to let out how i feel.
Take care xoxo*

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  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Hey this is a really great piece of work, parents wud always b parents and they never understand us. take care

    stacy

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindushik

    Omg what a great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    I was exactly like that with my mom. it took me getting arrested for her to see i needed help. great poem and i hope they open their eyes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ms Joanna Dark

    That was a great poem. i seriously feel like ripping it off the screen and shoving it in my mom's face. i related to it about 100%. great work. keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    I LOVED this poem. and I can relate to it seriously! 5/5 plz read min and comment it to plz.