Don't Give Up *jess..to u babe

by Torn   Nov 8, 2005


Don't go away,
Please don't give up.
Hold on through the nights,
We'll make our own luck.

You are amazing,
I know you've heard it all.
And though i watch you strive,
You constantly seem to fall.

I'm telling you I'll catch you,
I'm those arms that wont give in.
I hold you forever,
If that's what it takes to win.

Please don't give up,
I know that you're strong.
Stop being so hard on yourself,
You know you're not always wrong.

Someone once said,
Don't always give up.
At the fist sign of failure,
Rather push again with your chin up.

Babe i love you to bits,
Although we've been apart.
I care for you as much now,
As i did from the start.

I know what it feels like,
To always hit rock bottom.
I know what it's like,
To have feelings you can't fathom.

But Hun I'm by your side,
As are so many others.
We all love you so much,
We said we'd look out for each other.

So don't make that choice.
Be strong and be proud.
Because you're a wonderful girl,
You're gonna make it, say it loud.

I love you Hun...jess...don't just 'give up'...and please don't shut me out...

*Please comment everyone..would mean a lot...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Great, great, great job. It was really inspirational, and I'm sure your friend thanks you. It was really nice of you to write her a poem, and encouraging. After reading that, she should recover. That was really amazing. Fantastic, one of my favorite poets on this site. You have such talent! Nice job.

    ________________________________Matt______________

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Girl.. this is amazing!! i mean a very sweet dedication adn gr8 words of wisdom.. and especially coming from u.. GIRL, u gotta learn from urself.. hehe.. but that was reli so nice and u even made it rhyme.. i noe this helps u a lot 2 be ther 4 ur frend that uve bin ther, so u can directly relate.. and i hope both of u stand strong 4 each other.. i can see the love that bonds u 2gether.. i especially love ur last stanza...
    love ya girl, never give up
    Nanno
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    What I always say, is NEVER give up, EVER. Life is sooo wurth living.

    Great that you stay by her side through it all.

    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    This was a really awesome poem. VERY insirational. :) 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great!!!!!!!!!!