I Guess It's Goodbye *kate*

by Torn   Nov 15, 2005


Tonight you broke my heart,
I know this feeling all too well.
This stabbing pain in my chest,
That pain loves to dwell.

Twisting all my insides,
Until I no longer feel myself.
You do this to me every time,
And yet I go back for more.

Hoping that one day it'll be different,
That we’ll find a way to adjust.
Or maybe that you'll change,
But I'm asking for too much.

I love you more than a sister,
Yet I hate you all the same.
You make me feel so low sometimes,
And then you do it all again.

Why do you twist everything round to you?
As if you're all alone on this world.
Open your eyes and look around,
There is a whole other life waiting.

I needed to be a light for you,
The one you never had.
I tried my hardest just to be there,
But I'd always seem to fail.

I think I was too messed up,
To be able to be thinking for you.
I think I was falling myself,
And for once needed to be caught.

You made it quite clear,
That you don't want to be friends.
It's always been your choice,
So I guess this is the end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fall X Child

    I love your poem. it reminds me of the one i just wrote. i had a friend just like yours. maybe were talking about the same person lol. but anywho your poem was great

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Oh hun...I'm sorry u hev 2 go through that...but I can promise u...I will never treat u like that...even if i know u in real life...well...it's a loss 4 ur friend...I hope she realize what she is doing 2 u...but deep down I know u hope u guys can still be friend...just don't giv up on that...

  • 18 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    You put me in a postion to choose, its what you want not me, i miss you u don't miss or care about me so don't pretend to....don't calling me selfish, self-absorded thios fight wasn't my choice...yopu handled your emotions in the wrong way...wb

  • 18 years ago

    by ALEXIS

    Sorry 4 u

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Good poem. very heart felt. it was well worded, with depth and emotion. good work. i'll look out for more of your work...hope you do the same for me, lol

    Brad

    P.S. if you do read some of mine, please vote and comment, thanks

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