The Storm

by ...:NiKi:...   Nov 16, 2005


Rain starts to fall,
Slowly at first.
The drops fall faster,
And then the cloud bursts.

My heart is ripped open again,
My soul shattered to pieces.
I want all of this to end so badly,
But the pain never ceases.

Why can't I get over you?
I yell into the wind.
Why did I think you were worth all this?
And how could I ever be so blind.

Thunder cracks over my head,
Yet I only hear your haunting voice.
I start to run, away from everything,
Since it's my only choice.

Lightning strikes all around,
Right now I wish it would just hit me.
Then I would be gone from all this hurt,
And my heart would finally be free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    I really liked this poem it flows really well and the imagery is great good job!!
    xaaronx

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Great poem, i agree about the commas n stuff...but all the same its great without them 5/5 jesxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wauw, amazing.. commas and periods... okay, might help a litle. yet it reads easy anyhow.

    good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by x-Beth-x

    - awesome 5/5 -

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This poem is great, i love the way you used the storm to illustrate your feelings

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