Can't he see?

by ...:NiKi:...   Jul 15, 2005


Can't he see what is going on?
How she rips him apart,
and tries to put back the pieces
but its still her fault
in the end.

Can't he see how she doesn't care?
that he is just being used
to fill a void in her heart
that she has abused
because she needs love to live.

Can't he see that she isn't the one?
and that he needs to move on
to another chapter in his life
and the light of dawn.

Can't he see that someone else is there?
waiting for him to be hers
hoping her dream will come true
or her life will just be a blur.

Can't he see that this other girl loves him?
and wants him to hold her in his arms
and chase away her fears
to keep her safe from all harms

Can't he see this poem is written for him?
to realize how hes being blind
and open his eyes
to what is being played in his mind.

Can't he see...
I love him????

*dedicated to all guys out there that need to open their eyes to everything around them, and everyone...*

Copyright - Niki Schultz 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    A really expressive poem with a sorrowful twist at the end.. I really like it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Yea, I agree with you...Guys need to open their eyes somethimes and look out onto the world with an open mind

    Good Job!
    CK♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    *dedicated to all guys out there that need to open their eyes to everything around them, and everyone...*

    O yeah! okay down to critics, I don't think this poem needs any changing, for when you change one thing you change the rest. and I woulden't want this poem to change.
    I wonder, how long have you been writing?

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    excellent! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    that is so sweet!!! nice job!!

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