by ...:NiKi:... Aug 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Standing on the edge, |
by Natasha
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I think this poem is very captivating.. it kinda stays in you mind for a while. |
by Darien
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That's a really sad poem. Different from all the suicide poems I've read. Most of the others are about cutting. Good approach, and great imagery. Keep up the good work :) |
by ScarletHaze
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wow hun this was beautiful u truly are talented! xox |
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it flows really good! oh i love this one!!! |
by Nicholle
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I really liked the rhyming and flow of this poem. It was very good. Keep it up |