You made me cry

by Stephy   Nov 17, 2005


Tried something new...not so great but oh well
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You made me cry
Over and over again
Unforgiven you are, all you do is lie

Making me go through this pain
And all you find to do is say it's not that bad
Don't you see that there's no point? You have nothing to gain
Even if you think that in the end we'll be glad

Moving on, that's what I'm trying to do
Erase all the memories, erase you

Couldn't you at least make a choice, all you had to do is try
Return to her now, it's too late
You made me cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Cool poem, love it...keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Hey hun..once again, great poem u have heaps of talent.
    God i relate to this poem so much it's scary!!
    take care of urself oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey Steph, Its a good poem I liked it. I wish that was possible.. "erasing all the memories" I would love to erase some of mine. Haha. Cause everytime I look back, I see this path I have left behind me, I can't remember the good times, only the bad, haha. Only when I think very hard I can remember something that was good and it will bring a smile upon my face, but then I think further and remember how it ended, that I lost that friend, or whatever,.. you know..

    Jesus I am rambling??? Any way.. I just love your poems because it makes me ramble.

    Hey girl, also thank you very much for you comment(s) on mijn poem(s). Especially the one comment on "she is drinking again"It really meant a lot to me you know.. It's just that.. It was a rough night, and I wrote that poem.

    Too bad she is too stuborn to listen to me. Or it is just the alcohol that is blinding her. I don't know.. But hey, I'll be fine. I survived this once, and I am sure I will survive it again. So no worries.

    But hey thanks a lot that you said I could private messege you anytime. Basically that means I can knock on your door whenever I want, actually... none of my friends ever said that to me. So that's very special. Thank you very much.

    Girl, please keep writing, I cant wait for a new poem.

    Erm.. anything else I would love to say? Just excellent poem, 5/5, keep up the good work and take care -xxx-

    You can always knock on my door aswell whenever you need me. Love ya.

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