Torn

by Stephy   Aug 17, 2006


His smile, His Laugh
The Way He Makes It All Change In A Flash

Your Touch, Your Kiss,
How Did We End Up Like This?

His Voice, His Look,
When He First Walked In My World Shook

You Love Me, You Care,
Hurting You I Could Not Bare

He's There, He Listens
He's The Only One I Can Always Let In

You're Here, You're Ready,
Yet Inside I'm Still Not Steady

He Left, Now He's Back
He's All I Can Think About Let's Face The Fact

You Came, You Tried To Clear The Storm
But I'm Still Left Here, Torn.

** Not My Best...Hadn't Written In A While...This Just Sort Of Just Popped Into My Head...**

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, i love your choice of words they flowed so well. great write, thanks for sharing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey sweety,

    Guess who's back? I'm afraid it is no surprise to you, since you already had noticed my return. Thanks hun =)

    As you know I love your work. This is fantastic. I wish such great poetry would "just pop into my head" haha.

    I love how you start the first lines, it gives the poem a great flow.

    While reading I could not see where you were going until I read the last part of the poem;

    You Came, You Tried To Clear The Storm
    But I'm Still Left Here, Torn.

    It really hits in like a bomb. Such a sad ending.

    I love how you end this poem with "torn", the same as the title.

    I loved your poem hun. Very well done once again. Keep writing!

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Nice rhymthem.. hey if you ever wanna chat, msn = moka989@hotmail.com

    Ian

  • 17 years ago

    by Jay-Jammal

    Well..this poem was really amazing, i think u really written so very lovely steph..just keep the good JOB up....5/5...

    Jammal

  • 17 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Ahhh its really good. im here for u whenever u need me. i love u and miss u more than u know.

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