This World Is Dark

by Torn   Nov 18, 2005


The engulfing black,
Forms a shadow over my soul.
And love that i lack,
Continues the descent of this hole.

I'm forever thankful,
To the world and its beauties.
But forever regretful,
To me and my insecurities.

I'm sick of this fight,
I'm telling you i want out.
I don't think there is a light,
All i do is scream and shout.

I'm tired of all the pain,
And the continuous scars.
I don't want to play this game,
For the rest of our lives.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LOVE.ME.HATE.ME

    Great! Loved it! Keep on writing! Could have worked on the end but 5! *Props*

    Keep on living!
    -Jin

  • 18 years ago

    by Vulnerant Omnia, Ultima Necat

    I love this poem "extremely dark"
    its awesome!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wow! awesome! good job!
    a deep msg has been conveyed in few words. keep it up dear!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You have to...we cannot lose...even if we did...we can always play again...until we win...there's no use being a loser...besides...u r still young...this is only the beginning of the road...look at those adults...ur gram...ur parents...although it's hard for them...they still continue to survive in this world...so never give up hope on a better life...k...luv ya hun...always

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