The Mysterious World

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Dec 19, 2005


There's an entire world inside of me
A world that you will never see

It's a mystery never to be revealed
In my body, it remains sealed

There is only one lonely soul inside
That soul is the me that I've tried to hide

In that world, she is all alone
That entire world is all her own

She knows nothing but pain
and that's how it will always remain

She sits in the dark and cries
Allowing the salty tears to flow from her eyes

Why is she so sad?
Was her life really that bad?

These questions will remain unanswered
Because they aren't meant to be discovered

Once again, the world is a mystery
And that's the way it will always be...

© 2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Aazing work hun. I loved every sigle line, it caught my attention very well. Keep it up babe and Ill read more

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, loads of emotion and very clearly written

  • 18 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Thas really gud BJ. ghehehe i loved it to read. keep up the good work. hugs and kisses. R.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    BJ, that was very creative. Although the best of us feel this way many times. Nice work, I loved the emotion you put into thie piece.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5