My sweet Angel

by BleedingAngel   Dec 28, 2005


My sweet Angel is crying tonight
feeling so alone and weak
she is ready to give up the fight
and now death is what she seeks

She is cutting her bleeding wrists
trying to find peace within
she tried so hard to resist
but the blade torn her white skin

She is too weak to even eat
all caught up in depression
she wants to forever go to sleep
not seeking any attention

I was once like this
all empty and broken inside
I use to cut open my wrists
but I had an Angel by my side

Let me be your Angel now
I will help you through
you will make it some how
trust me, I won't leave you

My sweet Angel, I pray
let me take away your knife
please, I need you to stay
I need you here in my life

*For my sweet Angel Jenie, I love you and I will help you through this, I promise, together we can do anything, right?? LYLAS*

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey sabrina. powerful poem. hit me hard, almost cried kind of thing. Keep writing cos you're doing a great job. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    A really heartfelt piece, hope it does the job.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Though I didn't like this as much as the other two, but I like how you can make a rhythm for your poems, it flows just right and the tone you set them in, it just makes the whole poem more readable.

    A nice and sweet dedication. Good stuff. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    One of the sweetest dedications i have ever seen.
    a poem liek this is sure to help her realise that life can be filled with happiness too..with angels by your sides.
    you are an amazing person..
    take care huni and all the best to ur friend as well..
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow... this is such an inspiring poem that you wrote for your friend.. reading this poem is very touching and it gives people hope that they can make it thru depression very well written and a wonderful message to it =) i hope it works out for you.. beautiful poem

    --emotionless19*

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