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by David Marshall Jan 31, 2006
Sadness, depression /
I've had enough, I can't take it anymore.
Don't be surprised if there's blood on the floor.
It feels like my heart has just got impaled.
I tried so many times, but obviously i failed.
That's it I'm through, give me a knife.
This time I mean it, I'm ending my life.
I thought for a minute and looked at the sky.
Maybe theres still hope. I don't have to die.
I cried for hours, what will I do.
I can't imagine ever replacing you.
I still got friends, and family.
After a while i started to see.
Besides, there's many years ahead of me.
I think I'll finally move on, so my soul can be free.Â© Copy-righted by David A Marshall
by Sarah Ann
Excellent, wonderful poem! Your poetry is really superb because you have the ability to take a topic everyone writes about and make it so unique through your own words. Keep it up, I really enjoying your writings. 5/5 xxx
That is such an amazing poem and really sends out a powerful message. I love the way that you ended it. Great job on this. The flow & the rhythm really held up well.. great job!
by Ashley Arnold
Thats really really great!!!
I give this one a 5 of 5, keep on going.
Wow, great poem, i really like the ending, and how he decides not ot do, different end form a lot of suicidal poems i've read, gives hope and a desire to live, well 5/5 good poem