Do u really see me?

by Paige aka Kayla   Feb 15, 2006


Look into my eyes
and tell me who you see
do u see me
or the girl i pretend to be

do u see, a little girl crying
downing in all of her tears
always feeling nothing but pain
always frightened of her fears!

do u see the slits on her wrists
and all the blood she's shed
do u know how she feels
always wishing she was dead!

i wrote this poem about me! i was feel really depressed at the time! I'm alot better now!

please vote and comment!!!
xoxoxoxoxoxo

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  • 18 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    That was really good. short, but clear. sad tho =[[ im glad ur better [[not depressed anymore]] ohh thanks for the poems comment. i appreciated it. =]] keep up the good poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Levy

    Wow that was good!i really liked it.i felt the same so many times.im glad you feel better.!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I'm glad you are better now...jeez this poem is so sad... If you ever need to talk I'm always here. Great writing though, this is one of my favorites of yours!! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki McKay

    I liked this poem...its like you writing about me....keep it up girl..../Nikki

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