Public and Padlocked - Parkour

"Everyday I pass that gate
'No Tresspassing' Well it's too late
I took a risk and climbed a fence
And freedom is my sole defence
You can't take my life away
These streets are ours, and ours to stay
Your legal standing will not hold
How can this public land be sold?"

^^ "Tresspassing" -- "trespassing". "Defence" -- "defense". Those may not be misspelled, because of the difference in spelling between countries, but I thought I'd point those out, in case they are. In the second line -- "Well" shouldn't be capitalized. Rather, I think the line would look better as.. "No trespassing - well, it's too late".

Those are the only things I can find that I would.. disagree with in the piece. Everything else, I like very much. It's very well written, and the rhymes are good. 5/5

``Briana

Wow, yet again another great poem.. flows really nicely, and i love the subject :D

It was awesome, it was really a good read
xx

Aaa the night
the pheramone spray
the poetry
=]

I thought this poem was cool, not sure precisely why. Like you said for my two, it just... works! Good job.

-DJ