Public and Padlocked - Parkour

by Sole   Mar 9, 2006


Everyday I pass that gate
'No Tresspassing' Well it's too late
I took a risk and climbed a fence
And freedom is my sole defence
You can't take my life away
These streets are ours, and ours to stay
Your legal standing will not hold
How can this public land be sold?

Confined by signs and strangers
Living for freedom and danger
No barbed wire can stop me
No padlocks, I will be free

Lock me up for Heavens sake
These wicked laws were made to break
I want to run, I want to fly
This private land has caught my eye
Who knows who owns this patch of green
This patch of green has never seen
A free foot running, running fast
For years its been trapped behind bars

Confined by signs and strangers
Living for freedom and danger
No barbed wire can stop me
No padlocks, I will be
Free

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  • 11 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    "Everyday I pass that gate
    'No Tresspassing' Well it's too late
    I took a risk and climbed a fence
    And freedom is my sole defence
    You can't take my life away
    These streets are ours, and ours to stay
    Your legal standing will not hold
    How can this public land be sold?"

    ^^ "Tresspassing" -- "trespassing". "Defence" -- "defense". Those may not be misspelled, because of the difference in spelling between countries, but I thought I'd point those out, in case they are. In the second line -- "Well" shouldn't be capitalized. Rather, I think the line would look better as.. "No trespassing - well, it's too late".

    Those are the only things I can find that I would.. disagree with in the piece. Everything else, I like very much. It's very well written, and the rhymes are good. 5/5

    ``Briana

  • 13 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Wow, yet again another great poem.. flows really nicely, and i love the subject :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was awesome, it was really a good read
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by azlan26

    Aaa the night
    the pheramone spray
    the poetry
    =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Minkus

    I thought this poem was cool, not sure precisely why. Like you said for my two, it just... works! Good job.

    -DJ

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