Stay Awhile

Short, but sweet

Very nice sounds like my life

I've been through this feeling before. Only problem was that the guy was really sad about his decision and wanted everyone around him to feel his pain. It had been best for me just to let him go in the end. Good poem!

-Artimis-

I rili liked the poem, the emotion you gave across was great, i especially liked,

"I know your with her now
Because that image haunts my mind"

very expressive! great write, jes x

This poem sounds really desparate. But I understand what you're saying. It makes me sad...Good work.