Wish You Were Here

by Bridgette   Apr 16, 2006


I sneak a glance of you
As you pass on by
And I pray to God
That you were still mine

Your deep blue eyes
And your silky blonde hair
Still make me melt
And wish that I was there

Your loving heart
And your caring touch
That's what I long for
When I think too much

My eyes still water
When I think of you
And my heart still breaks
I just don't know what to do

I remember the day
That we said goodbye
My heart was so crushed
All I could do was cry

Soon my heart grew bitter
And my love turned to hate
And I'm so sorry for that
But you made my heart ache

So now we are enemies
And it's killing me inside
And when I said I didn't love you
We both know that I lied

I'm sorry for the way things are
And for the way I acted too
There's only one thing left for me to say
I'm still so in love with you

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    OMG! I loved this one! It was so good! You are such a great writer! Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    "Your deep blue eyes
    And your silky blonde hair
    Still make me melt
    And wish that I was there"

    I like how you described him..* Usually when people write love poems, they don't do that.

    The poem is really good. Everything will be ok though. You'll get over him sooner or later. I'm sure you will. Just stay strong :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, try to add some more imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    'Your deep blue eyes
    And your silky blonde hair
    Still make me melt
    And wish that I was there'

    Awesome stanza - I can relate :( Though a little differently. Very well written - loved the whole poem. Makes me want to cry!!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    That was a very sweet poem, i like it alot
    if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
    - Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

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