Fading smile

by David Marshall   Apr 16, 2006


My smile begins to fade,
the stars disappear.
I wish you would have stayed,
sorrow in the air.

The wind blows silent,
the sun no longer has a shine.
You came and went,
you're no longer mine.

the trees die in my path,
sensing despair.
I feel depressions wrath,
now that your not there.

The ocean sings to me,
empty and alone.
Across the endless sea,
nothing left is shown.

I miss you so much,
my heart is forever hallow.
God, give me a chance,
a new path I'll follow.

She's all i had,
soul struck by thunder.
This life is sad,
I really did love her.

I'll leave everything,
my feelings forever true.
The ocean continues to sing,
I wonder what to do.

I'm not by her side,
my life's not worth while.
All I've done is cried,
where is my smile.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    David... it's so sad!! omgoodness thats so amazing though. I love your poetry... dont ever stop k? or else... hehe!

    Love Always
    ~Casey J

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Such A Great Poem...It's Like Your Looking For Your Smile...I Love This Piece Of Writting That Your Did...Your Choice Of Words Is So Fascinating! Keep It Up...
    Take Care...
    With Love,
    Piink :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Good rhythm and flow to this poem, uv confused your and you're in some places though. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Daranged_psycopath...wholovescheer

    O baba i love that poem!

    but y r u so sad ?!? can you write a happy poem for me just 1 time pleeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee i mean you seem so upset and depressed when you write. i understand that you are being creative but i mean where is the spark huh?..........

    well i will write a happy poem if you do too

    ok

    starting.......................not yet..........not yet............not ...........NOW~!~

    LUVS YA MUCH

    DIVA

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