by Sole Apr 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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Fires fueled with global corruption |
by Tara Kay
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Awesome, it slows very well, and is good and catchy. mwah |
by Kaylee
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I liked how this one was different then you usual ones. It did have a strong sense of imagery to it. I think your weakest points though where the short lines about decay and never nothing anything but that. But that's just me. Your whole poem flowed well though, the title stood out, and it seemed damn well decent for a life section poem. |
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Brilliant peice, the form and structure are great and the rhyme perfect with no sign of being forced. |
by Tripp
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Absolutely amazing poem. near perfect rhythm and rhyme. |
by azlan26
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Damn impressive Sole...this is one stroke of genius...I'm blwon away...all the way to where you are meeting me today infact |