The finished copy of Perfect

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Apr 25, 2006


Perfect family
Perfect life
Perfect smile
Is that what you see
when you look at me
The smile it\'s fake
MY life a mistake
My family is pretending to be
what they want to be
Pretty much like me
fake

Tell me what can you see
When you look at me
A girl with the broken smile
Going 100 miles
in the wrong direction
Thinking only of perfection
Being only what people want me to be
Everything but me......

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    WOW. I loved that! The flow was perfect and the emotion intense. I loved it! To be it sounded a bit like verses of a song. I can imagine somebody singing it. Wonderful.

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...excellent...i can relate so well to this...i too pretend to be something i'm not...it like i put a mask on my face at school and stuff...well...anyway...i loved your poem...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    I can really relate to this poem!! it's written in a way that just makes you picture it! i loved it! 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 17 years ago

    by 111308

    Awwww...This One Is Extremely Sad...And I Relate To It ALot......Your Poems...Are Amazing..I Wish I Could Be A Great Writer Like You!...5/5 BRILLIANT! I'm always here for you if you need me! you have my email you have my msn name and you have my aim, so you can always reach me :D!
    Love,
    Steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*
    P,s Miss talking to you :D

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