X Awkward Last Words

by Sole   May 11, 2006


Been together for far too long?
Has the colour really gone?
Looking for a better life?
Words, the blackened, bloodstained knife

Can we still be best of friends?
Or is this where our friendship ends?
Wasn't I your 'only one'?
Words, the bullet from the gun

Have you ever really cared?
Don't you feel guilt? Are you not scared?
Was our love completely vain?
Words, immense inner pain

Your conscience does not exist
Never stopped at seconds, came back for thirds
Laid into me with bloody fist
Careless, painful, awkward last words

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Thats weird im listenin 2 a song called that..:P anyway, wow great poem! great wording, it really brought power to the poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well it was very sad, the last stanza's rhyming pattern changed up, and wasn't all in the right flow. but none the less it was a good poem!!!

    -Chanelle-

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very sad poem poem. It was a great poem aswell. You used excellent vocab in this piece. I really liked the third stanza alot. I can relate to it so much. You've done really good on this poem aswell. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a nice poem... Emotionally strong and well written... Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    A very good poem. you keep astonishing me by your pen.

    all the best

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