by Kaylee Jun 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Tonight I might pray, |
by Biscuit
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Good but not excellent, i like the rhyming but the rhythm is a bit rocky adn why do u have commas at the end of each line? they are unessaceary (cant spell tht!) poetry follows the same punctuation as normal literature. commas should not be used randomly. |
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Wow. |
by LadyPearl
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Excellent descriptions and perfect rhymes. thank you for your comment |
by Janice
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This was good..very deep..good work..i'm glad your friend's book inspired you. |
by Lovely Bones
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I'd like to check out that book =) |