Don't Leave Me Here

by GretaInsideOut   Jul 5, 2006


Can't remember.
Faceless and hidden.
It's been so long.
Time elapsed like rainfall,
Slow and cold.
I thought it could pass.
I thought I could cope.
Show no fear,
Show no emotion.

Cracks were forming.
Nobody understood.
My conscious mind was evaporating into nothingness.
I was drifting further from those who loved me.
Wracking my soul for answers,
Finding nothing, just more disappointment.

Save me from this overflow.
Pull my head above the blood.
Don't let me die here.
I need to be brave, to face the past.
Don't leave me here to cry alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Aww a sad piece i didnt get it at first but as the second stanza kicked in the meaning of it all unfolded nice :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Simple, forceful lines that gave a more sharper tone to this piece than any flowery language. It had this raw....dare I say brutal? way that gave it a more powerful tone. Some nice lines and a good flow.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    Well done. Very heart felt. Take care. Love u to comment on any of mine.

  • Hey hunni i love this its beautiful

    kisses n cuddles