One chance

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 1, 2006


Look into your heart
search your inner soul
find out what you need
let your story be told.

because there is only one chance
to find the true you
you have to fight for your beliefs
you have to find whats true.

let your friends encourage you,
push you further through life,
make you smile when you cry
make them remember you when you die.

if you have read this plz comment and ill return the favor XXX thnx

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I liked what I assumed this poem was trying to tell the reader. Be yourself, express yourself, and be true to yourself because the longer that you deny you the harder it makes life and the longer you will miss out on the joys around you. I must admit though I didn't particularly like the way that it was presented. I think that it needed more metaphors because it makes it easier for the reader to relate if they don't have the idea of the poem right in front of their face, it gives the reader a much broader spectrum and with that more chances that they will appreciate it. I also think that this poem could have been presented a bit better if the word “You” wasn't viewed so often. It takes away from the message of the poem and it makes it harder for the reader to visualise what is happening. I think a little bit more practise and this poem will be amazing it just needs a bit more work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This one is so cool! I love it! Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Short simple and sweet i loved it very insperational more people should have this kind of out look on life great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by jim7my

    I really like this one. its really good!

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I likes this one too.