Thunderstorm Tears

by *Charisma*   Aug 20, 2006


Thunderstorm pour for me
Cry the tears that won't come out
Lightening crack your whip hard
Scream because I can't shout

Purple sky mix your colors
Show the fury I can't show
Thunderstorm drench the ground
Pour for me where I can't go

Cuz I feel like a tidal wave
Being pushed the other way
Still I hold it all inside
Waiting for it all to die

I'm not angry with this world
I don't want to hurt anyone
But every now and then
I can feel all alone

So thunderstorm pour for me...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I didn't really like the last two stanzas, buut the first two I really did like. I loved the angle you wrote this piece from. I can't pick a favorite stanza, but its definitely out of the first two.

    Brad

  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry, love, but I just didn't like this piece very much. The rhymes were mostly okay, and the structure was good, but I just didn't really like the words and what was being said.

    Brad

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I like this one. It was a little different from what I usually read from you, which is probably a good reason on why I love it..shows off your talent as a writer that much more. Great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #7:

    I think this is one of my favorites from you, Charisma. I mean it's just a classic piece. And I think it's timeless, no matter how many times I read it I still love it. All the phrases and the flow and the emotion, all perfect!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I really like this poem. It is something anyone can relate to. I like how you related the emotion to a thunderstorm. Nice job!