I am The Luckiest Guy

by Goran Rahim   Sep 29, 2006


I felt like I have the world,
When she expressed her feelings too.
She put her head on my shoulder,
Saying "I love you more than you do"

That night I was awake until the morning,
Walking around in town.
Remembering the moment she said,
"I love you my dear GORAN"

What can be sweeter than
Those words from the princess I adore?
She gave me her kind heart,
What else could I ask for?

I am "the luckiest guy"
As her lips said "I love you"
Now I am just wondering
What could I do without you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's so sweet!!

  • 17 years ago

    by lexie

    Luckiest guy.and sweetest guy =]
    --lexie

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem; I love the way you ended the poem with a question---The only error I found is in the first line:

    "I felt like I have the world,"
    The verb tense changes so it sounds weird....that's the only thing!

    Overall, perfect poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh that was sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Great continuation to the series. Great poem.