Let It Burn

by *Charisma*   Sep 29, 2006


We started off as friends
But slipped slowly into more
It just kind of happened
But us you still ignore

Believe me when I say
I wasn't searching for this
I was satisfied with us
The thought of being "just friends"

Boys and Girls can't be
If they stay friends for long
Hard to fight those feelings
They come on way too strong

But I don't see a problem
We are so much alike
Give me one good reason
And I'll say it's not right

But if you can't provide it
Then let's see where we'll go
I have this feeling inside
And I need for you to know

There's things that we'll change
And things we'll need to learn
They say love is friendship on fire
So I say let it burn

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  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #6:

    The last stanza is just perfect!!! I mean that phrase -They say love is friendship is love on fire, so I say let it burn-
    (*sigh*) That right there is the epitome of passion. GREAT job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Gr8 job,, i loved the ending two senteces thats really good,, i like ur use of words,, gr8

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. this is another good poem by you. great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the last stanza, thats the best phrase i've ever heard!
    And as always, you never cease to amaze me with the sheer uniqeness (if thats a word) of your work.
    Excellent piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    There's things that we'll change
    And things we'll need to learn
    They say love is friendship on fire
    So I say let it burn

    I really like this stanza..It really sums up what you mean about the whole poem! I love it!
    xoxo

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