Til the End

Very sweet && amazing job you have done here again. sometimes people have feelings for their friends && their friends have feelings for them but it's better to be friends with them, then date && ruion something after words just incase. So i understand this feeling && poem you have put here.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

Just like your other poem, FANTASTIC! Another 5 from me, and thank you very muchly for the lovely comment.

Aww this poem was so cute ;-)
"And you kissed away my pain"
this line is soooooo adorable, it just made me think of having a boyfriend and letting him be your shoulder to cry on...i can't get over this poem.
the rhyming was excellent, didn't seem forced. aww 5;5

Thats a great poem its well written and i understand every word of the feeling of being loved and someone being there for you...thank you for the comment and thank you for pointing out the spelling error..thanks again Joclyn

I like this poem in paticular because it's one that I can strangely relate to. :] It's a cute poem, and the rhyming was awesome. It's nice and short, and a good read, stuffed with all the emotion it needs for a good friendship.

5/5!