by Tricky Daze Jan 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
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I want to live as i want |
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This poem seems unfinished and very ghetto sounding |
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There is a spelling error in 1st stanza but another good poem and watch your english some time cos and wanna ruin things |
by amoxi
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This one was great ur a great writer keep it up |
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5/5. Aww this made me laugh. Good poem! |
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I liked it. u just should change cos to cus but yea 5/5 |