by *Charisma* Jan 26, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
science fiction
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Deep into this murky sea |
by Jessie
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I really liked the imagery you used in this poem, it hooked me from the beginning and was consistent throughout. The loch ness monster has always fascinated me, which made your poem even more enjoyable! |
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A bit long, but over all good, 5/5. |
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COMMENT # 4 |
by Dark Demise
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Verry nice and wisely writen |
by Gem
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Nicely done sweets |