You Are (Etheree)

by Goran Rahim   Feb 9, 2007


I
Can not
Find enough
Words to describe
The heart beats when you
Gaze at me with a smile.
You are my sweetest angel
You are my longest dream ever
You are my every breath of life
You are the raindrops that blossom my heart.
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The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    You are such a good poet. I can completely understand how you got your poems published. They are amazing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I keep coming back to your poems you are an awsome poet.. Dont ever give it up.. i love your work!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    "You are the raindrops that blossom my heart"

    Great imagery from that line. You did a great job, and it's a nice format. Good job, great descriptions and metaphors.

  • 18 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I loved the words you used in this poem. It's just sweet. I love reading your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Awww so sweet, the girl you write these to is so lucky! 5/5

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