Before You Came Into My Life

by *Charisma*   Mar 5, 2007


Before You Came Into My Life

Just a little lost, a little spoiled, a little torn
I had a mom who loved me, and a dad who didn't live at home.
I was just the child of a marriage that didn't last.
A daughter of two people who couldn't get over the past.
And when the time had come for them to separate
My daddy didn't fight for me, but gave me away.
He said it was because he knew that I loved my mommy more,
But I can't help wondering if I wasn't worth fighting for.
And though I loved my mother, and we grew closer day by day
There was something missing inbetween the times I played.
Silent conversations and mommy crying late at night
Told me there was more. That something wasn't right.
Then the day she met you, there was a smile on her face.
I knew you were the answer to what was out of place.
See, I didn't have a dad, or at least one all of the time.
And I was a little afraid to say you could be mine.
Even years after your wedding, I gave you grief and tears,
But you must know I was battling, so many of my fears.
Now I can look back upon the days when I was young
Knowing that without you, mom and I were not that strong.
Before you came into my life, I wasn't a complete little girl
But now mom and I can say we've been handed the world.

By: Charisma*

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 3
    aww... this is soo cute... the flow was off in some places but the emotion was overwhelming... you describe things very well in this poem... nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I liked it a lot, but it seemed a little played out, the rhyms were predictable, yet tehre wasnt a definate rhym sceme. but the idea was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Hi stranger. It feels like i've been gone years and years and look how many poems i've missed from you!
    I can't read the love ones cos i'm on the college computer, so i bee-lined in on this one.
    And wow...
    It's so gorgeous and you managed to fit a life story within your words, a snapshot of a changing relationship..
    Excellently done sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe this one made me smile :)) i give it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mazie

    Awww dat is so sweet. i can reli relate 2 dis 1. i reli liked it, but dnt no a peom of urs i dnt like (lol). i luv da way all ur poems have so much emotion u can tell u reli care about wat ur writing. keep it up. 5/5
    MazieX.