Nothing Forever

I reallly love this poem, and can relate to it quite well

Wooot! I have not much to say about this one.. the last line was perfect.. and tied in perfectly with your poem here. I loved that quote and I was quite happy to see you inserted it at the end.. it was perfectly donee (:

5/5

Wow! This poem hit me like a ton of bricks. I have been searching for a poem that describes my feelings. Well done, thank you! (5/5)

Great poem. Good work. I can relate. Keep it up.

Okay, nothing really to say about this, other than it is once again a well written poem.

SOOO instead of searching for pointless criticism in a good poem, I am going to give you advice on your writing style.

Things I believe you should do:

1. Stop putting spaces between commas/periods and words!!!!!!!!!!!! hahah

2. Change it up some. I feel like I'm reading the same poems over and over. Although they are good, they are also about the same thing. I'm assuming a boy, unless you are gay...But seriously, broaden your topics. Experiment, write about something new!!

3. Change up the rhyming schemes. While this may be confusing to you at first, once you've mastered more styles of poems, the possibilities are endless. I'm like you, i prefer one style and one style alone. BUT when you learn the others, it really is wonderful. Just knowing that you can write your thoughts down in any form is extremely gratifying, plus you will feel like a literary genius. =D

That's really all. I like your poems, they really are the work of the modern poet. Which I feel society needs to respect. I mean come on, this isn't 1608, it's 2008 lol.

Good work, keep writing, and growing. I hope I helped some.

-Aus10