I loved how unique this was. Its so different to wha i normally read. And seriously, you have talent. Every poem of yours that i have read so far i have LOVED! lol. It flows so...perfectly and the rhyme scheme was great, your choice of wording was once again, well picked. I really have nothing bad to say about this wonderful write. I really loved reading it. =) 5/5
Wow. this was trully amazing. i love this reply. i love how you rhyme and how this flows. this is my favorite of the three that i have read. ur a great writer and it standss out dont let anyone take this from you. great job.