Great poem, wonderful...
It has a heartbreaking story to it, it left me in tears... It's odd you mentioned how society and family help in keeping dangeorous secrets away from people, but it is a truth everyone should aknowledge... because that way we can create a better society, instead of judging people by their problems we could solve them... not make them worse by adding shame to them... after all everyone has problems.
This poem really hit home for me, and i can truly relate. Its an emotional write that im sure alot of people are going to understand and relate to. Though you did another really excellent job with this poem. 5/5
Well i did like the poem. I mean the flow was perfect and most of your rhymes were great and never seemed forced. But the whole idea of the poem seems cliche and overdone. But still a well written peice. 5/5