Love At First Sight

Love at first sight?

Of course that exists.

Its when you meet some one special,

When youâ??re unable to exist.

^nice way of openin your poem here. but i saw a typo just fix it "you're". flow was good

You canâ??t resist his charm,

You want to record his laughter.

You want to be in his arms,

And live happily ever after.

^just fix the typo "can't" . true true all iwant to be is in his arms n be happilt ever after. i could actuallie see him holding me again.

Then reality kicks in,

You wake up from your dream.

You realize heâ??s not real,

He was never what he seemed.

^ once again just fix that typo "he's"...
it was short but not too short but your words were just perfect to decribe what u were tryin to say here. just fix those 3 mistakes n it will be perfect. keep it up girl! u trulie got talent.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

This poem was so cute and serious at the same time. I liked the way you described love at first sight. I feel like at the end I read a perfect description of a mirage. lol. I was really impressed once again. You are very good in love poems! 5/5

This was really short, I didnt really see much that I honestly liked about it.. it was a short statement that we all now.. true love exists at first sight. Of course. Sooo... what? lol. I dont know, I just really think you could of made this more of your own.

4/5.

Nice (4/5)

A few grammer mistakes that can be fixed other than that its an ok poem as i said before i dont really care for these types of poems but this was still written well