Sour Love

by Sydney   Apr 14, 2007


They say love is sweet,
more like sour
Its like the love i crave from you
that i would devour

The love that I felt
would never end
Its become the endless anthem
of all the feelings within

I remember your love,
feeling so great

Now that this has happened
I feel I'm just bait
Bait that you'd throw
into the ocean

The one that would be
blown and tossed with motion
It would kill me
and bring my death

The death of me
that would end my once
immortal soul and
steal my last breath

That breath would be your name
I guess its just all the same
Your love was so sweet
Now its just sour

You've become
what I feared the most
The enemy
that has begun to host

Host the arrival of anger
and all the sustaining
feelings that have
burned within

You've cut me deep
and now,
I'll never speak
once, and again

^one of my first poems^

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Very good and very understandable =) Doesn't it suck that something as wonderful as love can hurt so dang bad? =P
    I really liked this one =) 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww little sad but the lines where great had very interesting thoughts in it:) Aww and like the flow doesn't always matter so much.You are just expressing your feelings :) Keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Gosh! this one is my favorite! i like all the lines and words u put in this poet! the flow wasnt good but i love how u write its ok w/me and it doenst matter atleast u can express well! i give u 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this is beautifully written you did a great job!! but the flow needs some work

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