The Ultimate

by Sydney   Jul 9, 2007


You've kept me up
when i was down
You made me laugh
when I wanted to frown

Your my luminous star,
up in the midnight sky
The one I wish upon,
that always brightly shines

We'd tell each other secrets,
always whispered in our ears
Hoping we'd always be together,
never alone to face our fears

I'll always wipe your tears,
when your heart becomes torn
I'll be dancing right beside you,
in those glorious midnight storms.

When I'm far away
and you can sleep a wink,
I'll be the one to call
until you slowly fall asleep

Your my sister at heart
and that will always be true
I'll always be here
because i love you

My glittering phoenix
that sparkles at dawn,
You'll always be my best friend,
that title of yours will never to be gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    i liked this one alot more the the one i just read
    tis real good
    thx again for the comments

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is a wonderul friendship poem. It's very touching. Nice even flow throughout this piece. There was a lot of depth to this as well. Nice read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This was very cute.
    I loved the emotions you portray!
    And your flow was beautiful!
    great Job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    5/5
    great job
    work on your beat and if you choose to do a rhyming poem try to put rhyming words in there
    i'd give a 4/5
    but thats not good enough

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Aww. this was really sweet, it is a true friendship poem , and it was written very well also, the flow and rythm were very good and very cute. 5/5
    gabriella

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