Beneath

by Sydney   Jun 25, 2007


Tears drop
I'm all alone
Heart beating,
cold as stone

Lie in bed
Think of you
Holding on
Its Nothing new

Beneath my skin
What will you see?
A spark of hatred
Yearning to breathe

Kiss the lips
Steal my soul
Remember those words?
Never let me go...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. This poem was short yet the emotion was strong.
    That was beautiful and the flow was almost perfect!
    great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    "Lie in bed
    Think of you
    Holding on
    Its Nothing new"

    my favorite line
    great job
    5/5
    Sam Mayo

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was also good, though very short and contained, it was very strong and brilliant to me. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    This was really good i loved it! nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Wow! Nice poem =] I love the short lines, cause they are so powerfull! Keep up the good work.
    xxx

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