Done With You

by Sydney   Jun 1, 2007


Why'd you leave me?
Why'd you have to go?
I shared so many things with you
but now you've turned cold

You used to be so warm
Just so easy to come to
Now your just nothing
and I cant stand being around you

What the hell happened?
Why turn so bitter?
Is it because of me
and what I didn't consider?

Did your feelings just get to you?
Like they got to me
Did you feel like killing yourself,
just so you could flee?

I don't know you anymore
Were just strangers, you and I
I could care less about you
so you can just die

Bury your soul,
but I'll break it first
The pain I want you to feel
will leave you crawling in dirt

Revenge can be sweet,
and I hear it calling my name
Guess it's a warning to you,
but I'm not the one to blame

Its all your fault
cant you see?
If you hadn't cheated
and lied to me

This could have been avoided
Just with a simple yes
Too bad I'll have to this,
So breathe your last breathe...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    you wrote this amazingly
    this is my fav one so far
    great job
    really enjoyed it
    if it is true
    hope things worked out for you

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Harsh and raw wmotions portrayed with anger I loved it and thing you made this poem really deep. Im sure so many ppl can relate to this. the flow was spot on you really get the flow in your poetry flowing smooth without any bumps in the way. Well done on writing a poem like this enjoyable. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, so emotional and deep. i loved it, did it really happen? the poem was great but it still didn't really sound complete to me. just not enough detail in the words, sort of thing. but over all. it was great that was just my view. but 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    I feel that you need to add a few more words to each line, it would help the flow and effect the reader experiences.

    5/5 tho, well done. David

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I felt anger and hate in this poem..You reflected emotions and feelings so well..The wording was suitable and I didn't see any mistake of flow
    Good job,
    Laura

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