Darkness alone

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 25, 2007


(OK i actually don't believe this I'm just trying to look at the world through another perspective.)

In the home where light and shadows dwell,
we ask ourselves
Is there a balance so all is well ?

With light is there darkness?
With darkness is there light?

But reaching in the deepest corners of every mind and soul, the darkness is there and reaches deeper than any light.

Standing still for a time
until its right to replace the
light, it stands alone and thrives.

Created from the darkness the light cannot stand alone but the darkness needs no light and this is why it survives.

All light dies but the darkness stays for the rest of life.

( I know it sucks but oh well )
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  • 16 years ago

    by DarkMurderr

    Cool =) 5/5 ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by JA

    It didn't suck! I really loved it. Thanks for the comment and the vote. I hate animal killers also. They always think they are better than anything else and they always take advantages.

  • 17 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    That was amazing. i really loved it
    thank you for the comment by the way
    :) your very talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I'm a very honest critique so im sorry if anything i say is harsh but just a few pointers :)

    You have some very creative ideas that I do like keep them coming they will make great poems.

    I'm not all into non-rhyming poems to be honest I find them hard to read and hard to follow.

    Only change your style for you though if u liek it then dont change.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This didnt suck, I liked it. And like someone said up there its hard to write from another persons point of view, I actually like to do that. Anyways well done. 5/5

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