by The Queen of Spades May 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Please God, do not let me fall |
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This poem like your others has great flow and word choice but is rather unique in many ways which is good. "I want to heal a injured heart Put it together from pieces apart" those lines were fantastic and i think we all wish we could. amazing job 5/5 |
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What else can I say, but it sounds like a prayer. looks like a masterpiece |