Homeless 1 & 2

by Dee   May 26, 2007


Homeless 1

It's fun to be a homeless teen,
your not a child or adult you're stuck in between.
Moving in with people that you know,
knowing that you have a place to go.
You can smoke and drink and party like crazy,
you don't have to clean your mess you can bum around and be lazy.
You don't have to worry about whats around the bend,
or care about caring when things will start or end.
Its good not having rules or your mum and dad,
always telling you "don't do that it's bad"
You live life to The max and take it day by day,
not worry about whats next, what is on the way.
Its cool not having a home or a certain place to stay,
when you get feed up with rules you can always run away.

Homeless 2

It can be hard to be a homeless teen,
not an adult or child you're stuck in between.
Moving out of home can be really rough,
putting up with consequences can be just as tough.
Making your own decisions, the prices you have to pay,
Making mistakes all the time, learning things every day.
Trying to pull your life together, trying to do whats right,
The peer pressure and friends can be a big fight.
It's not all fun and games having no dad or mum,
not knowing where you'll live, if you going to be a bum.
You want to make a plan, and maybe settle down,
stop going to party's and always jumping around.
You get to the point were you want a place that's you own,
A place that you love, a place to call your home

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow dainee this is superb. No problem in word choice and he rhymes are very cute. I love the poem all the way. Its great 5/5 for sure. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very excellent write me love so much i love the way words can speak great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem,deep sad and all to real to life , wording was wonderful, nice flow and sent out a good message to everyone, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow... what do i say? firstly i think this should be made into like a poster or something for scholls etc as your essage is very very clear. i like it because when you first start readin it its the first thoughts you have of running away and being free, you dont consider everything you say in part two, i like this. i think your talent is very good and do honestly think this poem deserves a lot more than what it has because thats a strong and powerful message xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This is by far my favorite poem of yours. Its amazing. I love the change in ideas and the realization of reality. Keep it up

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