Blinding Light

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 1, 2007


Falling on death ears,
things you dont seem to hear,
listen and it shall reveal
the good in bad you seem not to feel.

Your noble cause
may seem right
but the light blinds
at times.

So check twice and let the shadow reveal their light
so you can hear the reality of life.

Keeping secrets
looks disgusting at times
but the shadows protect us all the time.

Its not evil,
we just cant see
so we fear

(PLz vote and comment)
and we misread.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Very thought provoking read. You seem like an interesting writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem andrew, love how it flows and how it is structured, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by jack

    It was a common situation for me, but i got over my drug problem, i was just putting i lighter side on it all, thanks for the comment on my poem,
    i love this peom especialy the start. great stuff buddy.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    Excellent poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Hey like this one, actually i read it twice coz it has deep meaning, but i already know what u want to say..GREAT WORK!!!