The child of the night

by isabel   Jun 1, 2007


Don't wake her up, the child of the night
Her soul is broken, won't stand the light
Still cries alone, still has no hope

Was there a reason to break her heart?
Her love beaten up in the dark
You are so evil, I wish you to choke

Said she was gothic, your (so called) friends
From the grave, a kiss, she sends
You were the reason for her death

Hope was still there, she couldn't see
The poor child is blind because of thee
Her hope rests in her final breath

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  • 16 years ago

    by beautisworthless

    Everyone else is telling you how to perfect your work or how absolutly fantastic it is well duh its fantastic you postd it and
    4 it you deserve a **HUG** lol
    and a gummi bear but i cant over night one to you!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Oh it was so dark and so blurring...on this one you did a real good job..and the flow keeps you going

    Well done
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really said. And although it was short, it held alot of emotion. You had a good flow, and nothing seemed forced! Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    A very good poem... the flow was great...keep on writing... thank you for sharing your talent... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dee

    Very well done.. mabye a few more words would make it eaiser to understand but still very well done...
    keep up all the good work

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