Strangest Love
by Goran Rahim Jun 3, 2007
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I don't know how to dare myself, |
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16 years ago
by xo kisses xo
This is really sad. so many people have to see the ones they love be married to someone else. its one of the hardest things. bery great poem 5/5
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16 years ago
by mrhope
I dont know what to say about it, but not your type of poem for sure.
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16 years ago
by Debbie
This was rather delightful to read, despite of its seeming technical errors. Secretly loving a person, who is apparently commited to someone else, is killing me as well. I have known about that feeling thoroughly for more than five years now. But I hope it will dwindle as time passes.
I liked this! Thanks for sharing. =]
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16 years ago
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Oh and as for the advice...
this probably isnt too great, but here are some options:
a. steer clear of her if possible
b. let her know how you feel
c. somehow tell your heart she can't be yours.
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16 years ago
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Hmm. the message was clear and al, but this wasn't your best work. i understand that a lot of times poets spill there hearts into a poem, but the structure and grammar dont roll along with the message. i found grammatical erros and such throughout this one. reread it and see if you notice anything.
=]
