Hate

by Dee   Jun 4, 2007


I hate the way i feel
and the things i do
i hate so much
like the way i love you

i have no control
control of how i feel
i don't know whats going on
i don't know whats real

i hate the way i love you
i think about you all day
but when i go and see you
i have nothing to say

the way you make we feel
blows away my mind
i wish i could hate you
but i can't you're to kind

*this is a poem i wrote a while ago and have never been able to finish....

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was so well written, the flow was good, wording was good, i like this one better. but still 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, thats really good, i have a suggestion, when i was reading this it made me think of a guy in my life, always been there for me but i tried so hardd finding a reason to push him away but in reality there was none, and i couldnt find a way to hate him. lately i lost him as he passed away last month, i was maybe thinking of you wanted to add to this poem, how about writing how you would feel if you lost him for good? just an idea xxxx although i must admit, it sounds good if you leave it alone? xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Again well done this poem was amazing. You are a talented writer keep it up. 5/5

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